“I wanted to thank you for the coaching you gave me.
I ended up being given an offer that was 10K over the top salary range listed, plus a 10K signing bonus and a relocation package, not bad.
I’m very excited for this opportunity to work for a great company and looking forward to starting in two weeks.
I believe that your coaching gave me the edge to get out of my own way and present myself in a way that made the hiring manager feel that they had to have me.
I wanted to let you know, that I am very grateful for your coaching and books, as they helped me prepare and frame my skills and experience in a light that would benefit the company and be a great fit for the team.”